Shoot and edit part 2

The original:

Here's what I did to it.  I started in Lightroom and did the following. 

• Decreased temperature and tint, increased exposure and recovery slightly.  All these changes were really minor adjustments.  That's it in Lightroom.
• In photoshop: I followed Ashley's steps on making the eyes pop using layer masks, and I lowered the opacity even more to try and make it as subtle as possible.
• That's pretty much it!  I played with white balance a little bit, but ended up not changing it in the end.  I just wanted a simple, clean edit of our bath time fun!
  

And side-by-side to compare.  Not a huge difference, but I like it.